Digital Story Critique: “1st Squad, 3rd Platoon”

From time to time, I’ve listened to episodes of StoryCorps that have aired on NPR.  The simplicity of personal stories using audio recordings is remarkable.  At times, you can hear the emotional undercurrents as people discuss pivotal moments that have forever altered the course of their lives.  A number of these audio recordings have been supplemented with  animation.  To be honest, I’ve often associated animation with comedy genres (“Looney Tunes”, “The Simpsons”, “Futurama”, etc), but I was amazed how the animation work done by the Rauch Brothers complimented the adversity story “1st Squad, 3rd Platoon.” This reflection is told by Marine Lance Cpl. Travis Williams, who talks about how he’s been able to cope with life after a roadside bomb killed all his team members in Iraq back in 2005.  For this critique, I judged the digital story on the following assessment traits (as discussed by Jason Ohler in his book Digital Storytelling in the Classroom:

  • Story – Williams unfolds his experience in chronological order, which gives the viewer time to absorb his story.  The narration feels genuine.  I could hear the sadness and struggle in Williams’s voice as he talks about returning to an empty barracks after the roadside bomb killed his comrades.  Fortunately, the story ends on a positive note as Williams admits he is finding ways to reflect on his good fortune and cherishing every day in civilian life.
  • Originality, voice, creativity – In addition to Williams’s earnest narration, the Rauch Brothers animation’s adds visual context to the digital story.  The expressions on the faces of the characters match the tone of Williams’s voice over.  At no point did I feel the visual element draw my attention away from his narration of tragic events.  The StoryCorps project producers (Lizzie Jacobs, Maya Millett & Mike Rauch) deserve a lot of credit for giving Williams the room to tell his story.
  • Media grammar – Excellent.  Having working in television production, I could recognize the stellar production quality of the entire StoryCorps production team.  Williams’s audio recording was crisp, clean, and rich in detail.  In one instance, I swear I could almost see him crying by listening to the narration.  The video and sound editing are smooth and efficient.  There is some nice instrumental music that adds to the tone of the story.  As I stated earlier, the animation by the Rauch Brothers was impressive.

This was a very emotional story to absorb.  It took me a while to condense my thoughts in a blog review.  Still, I plan on coming back to StoryCorps to check out more personal reflections about people dealing with adversity in their lives.

 

 

Digital Story Critique: “Birth of the Internet”

For this digital story critique, I selected a video from the University of Houston’s Educational Uses of Digital Storytelling site entitled “Birth of the Internet.” The author, Anita Vyas, tells a personal reflection on how the internet age affected her life.  For this critique, I choose to judge the video on the following assessment traits (as established by Jason Ohler in his book Digital Storytelling in the Classroom):

  • Research – In telling her personal story, Vyas ties into the evolution of the internet.  She includes a number of photos of major scientific contributors, like Robert Kahn and Vinton Cerf, but it’s difficult to register their identities with the quality of the narration.  Vyas does a good job of finding both historical archive images as well as incorporating her personal photos from her upbringing in India.
  • Flow/organization/pace – At times, I was confused about whether this video was a personal reflection or a research project.  Vyas goes back and forth between discussing her experiences using a desktop computer in 1990 to mentioning the launch of the World Wide Web in 1992 by Tim Berners-Lee.  Most of the images flowed smoothly.  Vyes utilized the Ken Burns style of photo presentation.
  • Media application – About 4 minutes into the video, Vyes includes a video clip of, I believe, is Bernes-Lee talking.  This media element seems out of place given that the visual elements have mostly been still photos, illustrations and artwork.  On the whole, the mix of images makes for a nice medley of visual presentation. There are some nice close-up images of computer chips and keyboards that add to the overall flavor.  Nostalgic images of Vyas’s father and her own children are especially poignant.   She ends on an up-to-date picture of her Facebook page, which is touching.
  • Citations – Overall, Vyes attributes all the media elements she uses, including a copyrighted song from Coldplay and the theme from Sesame Street.  Likewise, there is attribution to many of the images, but this end credit segment speeds through rather quickly.

Personally, I think Vyes should have focused more on her personal reflection on how the internet changed her life rather than how the internet changed everyone’s life.

Digital Story Critique: “It Takes a Crisis”

Often times, an instance of adversity can have long-lasting effects.  In searching for digital stories that give a short glimpse into how people adjust to sudden changes in their lives, I found another story from the Charlestown Digital Story Project entitled “It Takes a Crisis.”  The narrator, Charlotte Valentine, talks about how the psychological adjustments she had to make before and after she decided to divorce after 13 years of marriage.  For this critique, I chose to critique the story using the following assessment traits:

  • Originality/Voice/Creativity – From her time as a shy child to her success as a confident Certified Public Accountant, Valentine narrates her own story.  She discusses how growing up, she always was tough to “please others” and then later on, she learned how to “please herself.” Although the narration sounds a bit scripted, it feels genuine.  The story collaborator, Daniel Rodriguez, gives Valentine “room” to tell her story through her voice and her archived photographs.
  • Flow/Organization/Pacing – Rodriguez wisely presents the story in chronological order.  He organizes the still photos making it easy for the viewer to absorb.  There’s a nice variety of image movement (some story creators rely too much on bring the photos in and out, which was popularized by documentary filmmaker Ken Burns).   The pacing of the images is accompanied by cuts of light and playful piano music.
  • Media Grammar – Overall, the media elements are put together well, but their is a moment where it looks like a photo of Valentine in her flooded basement, after surviving a hurricane, appears to be Photoshopped.  This moment seems to interrupt the genuine nature of the archived images.

I highly recommend anyone to view either this story or the many other stories on this site.

Chapter Critique – “A Road Traveled”

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I was intrigued by the first chapter of Joe Lambert’s book, Digital Storytelling: Capturing Lives, Creating Community.  In chapter 3, Lambert tells his own story of how he, along with several other key contributors, founded the Center for Digital Storytelling.  His journey began in 1950s Dallas, where he grew up in, as he put it, a “small oasis of liberal friendliness in the desert of 1950s Texas conservatism” (p.26).  I was intrigued about how folk music of that era played a major role in shaping Lambert’s idea of storytelling.  He comments “digital storytelling is rooted fundamentally in the notion of democratized culture that was the hallmark of the folk music, reclaimed folk culture, and cultural activist traditions of the 1960s” (p.26).

Coincidentally, my mother has had a life-long interest in folk music since her days as a student at Iowa State University in the early 1960s.  On many a long drive to my grandparents’s house in Iowa, we would hear Peter Paul & Mary, Joan Baez and The Kingston Trio.  Although I’ve never been a huge fan of the genre, I understand why young people connect with those songs as well as with the songwriters of that time period.  Much of the folk music inspired college students during the protest movements of the late 1960s and early 1970s.  For Lambert, the folk music gave him ideas on how individuals, especially those marginalized by factors such as income, race and ethnicity, could tell their stories.  As Lambert puts it, “… the populist artist in the folk traditions sought out a way to celebrate the ordinary, the common person, and their daily battles to survive and overcome” (p.27).

In discussing the significance of folk music, Lambert brings up the idea of “citizen-centered authorship and authority” (p.27).  He further expands on the significance of this concept when discussing how, in 1993, he and his future Center for Digital Storytelling collaborators “came to understand that mixing digital photography and non-linear editing were tremendous play spaces for people” (p.32).  To me, the 20th century concept of “citizen-centered authorship” sounds very much like what we have now in the 21st century internet with WordPress blogs and YouTube videos.  These are forms of personal expression that are not subject to centralized editorial control.  As someone who went to college in the early 1990s and studied television production, our generation were just beginning to understand the possibilities of using video for storytelling purposes.  Unfortunately at that time, my educational institution, the University of Wisconsin-Madison, only had Panasonic camcorders and simple linear editing systems for us to put together our personal narratives, which were largely inspired by indie filmmakers of fiction such as Richard Linklater, Spike Lee and Quentin Tarantino.  I never thought I would drift off more towards the documentary genre later in my career.

One thing missing from this chapter was information on where Lambert went to college.  That might seem like a small omission to some, but I was curious as to what type of institution helped steer Lambert in his thinking.  He mentions coming to San Fransisco in 1976, but everything between his arrival there and his childhood in Dallas seems to be a mystery.  Personally, I found my time at the University of Wisconsin-Madison to be incredibly rewarding, despite learning with out-of-date video technology.  Overall, it was a very enlightening chapter that gave me a glimpse into the author’s journey.  I am already delving into the next chapter.

Digital Story Critique: “This is My Story: Dawn’s Story”

One of the Denver public television stations, Colorado Public Television 12 (CPT12), is supporting an initiative called American Graduate, an ongoing project to help local youth in their quest to avoid the pitfalls of life and graduate from high school.  Digital storytelling plays a key role in this initiative and CPT12 has posted a variety of videos created by American Graduate participants.  One of them is a story about a girl’s perspective in the foster care system called “This is My Story: Dawn’s Story.”

For this critique, I chose to review the video using the following assessment traits:

  • Writing – The author, Dawn, uses a very simple narrative to describe to the audience her experience as a foster child.  Details, like meeting her foster parents for the first time and going to church with her “new” sister, draw the viewer into her life.  On the whole, it sounded like Dawn had a good relationship with her new family while striving to maintain ties with her birth mother.  There was no hint of animosity or malice towards either group of people.
  •  Flow/organization/pacing – Not including American Graduate promotional material, Dawn’s story runs about 4 minutes.  She organizes her experience in a very simple chronological timeline from meeting her foster parents to seeing her birth mother again.  The linear progression is effective and, in some ways, takes the audience on a bit of an emotional roller coaster ride.  Nothing feels rushed and the photo images appear at a very steady pace.  The background music compliments the tone of the video.
  • Media application – In addition to the aforementioned background music, Dawn includes a good mix of original photos and video.  At the end, Dawn shows a present-day picture of the young woman she has become.  On the other hand, I thought she repeated a number of images too often and used some odd video effects that seemed out of place.

Stories of adversity take many shapes. I’m glad there’s a Denver-area television station that is giving young people an opportunity to express their rocky journeys through life.